Look, you know what the community wants, you've got all the right trigger words and everything, but your stories have no atmosphere. In order to make it anything worth reading, you have to make the situation feel like it could be a real-life experience. Imply something, for god's sake. Go read some stuff by FrenchSnack, or EmmaGear. They know how to write a story so that the characters are real people and that we can be honest observers of the action. Don't just say "and then she swallowed the guy and it was very sexy because-I-told-you-so and there was a lump in her throat and that was the guy and it went from the top of her throat to the bottom." Again, imply something, for god's sake. "The towering girl tilted her head back, and there was a sanity-shattering *gulp* as she swallowed. A faint lump descended down her slender neck briefly before disappearing into her chest, _____'s eyes followed it involuntarily past her breasts toward where he/she knew was the helpless man's inevitable destination. _____'s subconscious calculations swelled up, inspiring in him/her thoughts of what must be the poor man's reality, dropping into the humid chamber that was blah blah blah..."
Just write it like a story happening to real people, in which we, as the audience, are observers; not like a David Attenborough documentary in which he has to describe in excruciating detail every little thing that happens.
Just one fan's humble opinion.